懒懒的宝宝 发表于 2009-3-15 21:11

自己写的一篇关于老大的英语作文

My favorite star
In our deep heart,there always have favorite star.To me, like with many people,I have a favorite star,too.This is my secret,so I can’t reveal his name,but I believe you will know who he is after you read.

I will think of him when gardenia poen.He was born in Changsha,Hunan.He studied very hard when he was a kid.He was send into Beijing Foreign Languages Institute and to be a teacher when he end of learning.He has a lot of identities,like moderator,teacher,singer,actor,writerand so on.But so many jobs don’t let him fells there is a lot of pressure.Againest,just as he said the book,he is happy person..Not only does he can happiness,but also he can bring happiness to other people.I believe we all have watched the “Happy Home”,I watched it every Saturday evening,because this program makes me get a lot happiness.I’m very want to be his student,because in my mind,he is a kind and good teacher.He class lively and plain dress make he’s like every student.Although he is thin,also not particularly handsome,I’m very like him.He soesn’t like the other star who getting piered,wearing colorful clothes…His fans think he is a ordinary person.So,they call him “oldest” cordial.Not only does he is a moderator and a teacher that both kind and funny,but also he is a man with geed qualities.He has ever adopted many children and given much money to help poor people,but he never open.He is very smart and he loves reading very much.. “learn,struggle,and bear”become his life the words of real gold.In the minds of his fans sets a good example.

In the word,there are too many stories about him.Above are only a drop of water of the sea.The words have already over.I an this drawing to an end..Finally,I hope he will be happy and safe all his life,for he is my beloved star.



可能有一些语法错误,请大家谅解,毕竟我还是个初三的学生,也不可能写得太好.其实,如果真的要写的话会写出很多很多,只是我觉得,越喜欢一个人,就越觉得很难描述,更不敢轻易提他的名字.

爱炅8610 发表于 2009-3-15 21:23

You write very good and have worked hard!

冰色梦幻 发表于 2009-3-16 00:05

哈哈 最近店里感觉英语风刮得厉害啊~~

因为有炅 发表于 2009-3-20 17:47

宝贝很厉害了呢 写的不错 继续加油 要考到老大的学校哦 !!

炅炅的笑 发表于 2009-3-20 18:02

lele2010 发表于 2009-3-20 19:16

太强了,水平很高

云出岫 发表于 2009-3-20 19:24

宝贝,快乐大本营好像叫“HappyCamp"o哦!

小老虎 发表于 2009-3-20 19:25

初三就这么厉害啦~~加油呀

这个夏天 发表于 2009-3-20 19:36

宝贝加油呀
努力高考的时候考到老大的阿拉伯语系
和老大一起学习了
加油哦

zxwhj 发表于 2009-3-20 19:37

啊,为什么我的英语不行啊。。
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